Added some 1000 words this time around. Didn't realize my writing was of such a low quality. No wonder Twilight-senpai never noticed me.

For an example of how things got changed, here's an old paragraph:

It was a diaper. If she was going to be honest, it might’ve felt a bit damp on the inside, and, of course, Twilight had seen immediately that she’d used it. She’d probably told the hospital staff to put her in one.

And here's the changed version:

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I rewrote the third chapter of the story. It now is almost twice as long and also includes a scene where RD does cute foal-like stuff while only being semi-aware of it. Also changed some things to the encounter at the end, such as a more obvious regression of RD's mind and a bit more details on what she thinks about her diaper's state over the course of the chapter.

The last thing was really important and needed to be rewritten for the sake of creative righteousness.

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Small update:

Added a horror-tag to Don't Fear The Storm due to planned changes in the manuscript. I want to make this story more creepy than it currently is, contrasting it with the fluff of having a diapered Rainbow Dash. I kinda feel like doing that with MBS worked, so I want to go even further beyond with this one.

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